tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4165259630040710138.post3067450820415837327..comments2014-04-26T14:45:08.582-07:00Comments on PolyDoodle Pictures: A Change in the StoryUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4165259630040710138.post-13945305518906765362014-03-01T05:43:38.193-08:002014-03-01T05:43:38.193-08:00One thing id like to throw in here... I agree that...One thing id like to throw in here... I agree that the flashback is irrelevant with the mother being so prominent but I don't think the look to nowhere reads as anything more then a change of mind...<br /><br />If you ask me when Barnabas looks to the side you should cut to a picture of Barnabas and his wife or a painting of them so it reads that he's realising that he is failing her by berating their son for trying to "keep smiling".<br /><br />Just my two cents but that would read a hell of a lot better...Stitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10703950470101020401noreply@blogger.com